Feedback and a Fresh Outlook

Hi everyone!  My post about incorporating feedback into my compressed gas safety course, and improving equity and accessibility, got a bit long (as usual).  You can find the entire blog post here.  Thanks again to all of you for the kind feedback and suggestions along the way!

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Reflection on feedback as well as on the Accessibility and Equity

In response to the feedback provided on the course profile for Grade 1 students focusing on the topic of “Needs & Characteristics of Living Things,” it’s evident that the course has been designed to cater to the needs and interests of young learners. However, from the reviewers, I came to know about the further improvements or adjustments that enhance the overall learning experience.

 

Some highlights of the feedback received from the reviewer:-

  1. The course effectively meets the needs of Grade 1 students which acknowledges their curiosity and eagerness to learn about their environment.
  2. Reviewers also mentioned that the course profile is easily accessible and clearly labeled, ensuring ease of comprehension for all students. Instructions and guidelines are detailed, facilitating effective learning guidance.

3.    A variety of platforms are used within the course shell, such as worksheets on Canvas, LUMI interactive videos, and numerous Learning Management Systems (LMS). True/false and multiple-choice questions are used in interactive videos to promote student involvement. The assessments found in the Canvas worksheets consist of fill-in and multiple-choice questions, ensuring an accurate evaluation.

4. Both formative and summative assessments are integrated to evaluate student understanding comprehensively. Assessments are designed to reflect real-world scenarios and experiences.

5. The course material is tailored to the age group and interests of Grade 1 students, enhancing engagement and cognitive skills. It covers objectives effectively, enabling students to differentiate between living and non-living things and understand basic characteristics of living organisms.

Both in our Week 7 session and in the feedback comments, we received very welcoming and valuable feedback from our colleagues. The feedback indicated several persistent themes, such as the appreciation of the materials’ good organization, ease of use and attention to the student needs.

Thanks for reading my blogs and giving me the useful feedback.

Reflection on Accessibility and Equity:-  The last class’s topic on equity and accessibility was informative. I appreciate Katia’s work for sharing several resources and going into great detail about the topics.

 

Equity and accessibility are essential in the context of online learning. It is challenging to handle the issues constructively without it. Online learning environments use multiple accessibility components to meet the needs of a wide range of learners. These could include customizable font sizes, color contrasts, screen reader compatibility, alternate text for photos, and keyboard navigation options.

Online learning offers convenience, it also assumes access to technology and reliable internet connections. Instructors should be mindful of this and consider providing resources or support for students who may face barriers due to technology constraints. To address equity and accessibility in online learning, continuous improvement and adaptation are needed. Teachers must ask students about their experiences in the classroom and any obstacles to accessibility they may have encountered. By using this feedback, course design and delivery may be improved continually, maintaining inclusivity and ease of access for all students.

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To Be Honest……

To be completely honest, sharing my work with my classmates overwhelms me. Despite my years of teaching, and having taught many different classes and doing SO many lesson plans, the fear of someone looking at my work and saying it isn’t good enough scares me. I know the importance of feedback. Feedback is essential for my growth and development. Feedback provides me with new information from a different lens which helps me to improve my work. That said, I am very grateful for the feedback and comments my classmates provided me. Their feedback made me look at how I can make my course better.

“It’s incredibly exciting to have your work seen by others, to have others respond to it.”

I’ll begin by discussing the feedback I’ve received and outlining how I can make improvements. Afterward, I’ll share some positive comments from my classmates regarding aspects they appreciated in my course.

Feedback #1: Reaching out to each student individually at the beginning of a course. Yes, I completely agree that this would be incredibly time-consuming. An expectation that we have as online teachers, is to send a welcome email to all students that are enrolled in our courses. This email is just an introductory email to welcome them to the course and provide a bit of information about the course and how they can contact me. I ask students to respond to my email- usually but asking them a few random questions- so that I can confirm that they have received the email and that this is the correct email address they would like me to use during the semester.

Feedback #2: I indicated that interactions among students can be challenging due to learners completing assignments on different timelines. A suggestion could be for me to encourage students to collaborate through Discord and that is a great idea. Moving forward with my classes, I am going to try a platform like Discord, so that students have a place where they can ask questions and connect.

Feedback #3: In one of my interative videos, I need to add a pause so students have the opportunity to read and answer the questions. I will definitely make that improvement.

Feedback #4: There are some technical issues that I need to fix. My audio wasn’t working in my H5P Presentation, and for my Blog Post some information was cut off. Both will be easy to fix.

I am grateful for the positive feedback I received from my classmates. I appreciated learning that they found my course “professional” and “ready to go”.  I am glad that they found my course easy to navigate and that my course “accommodates learning styles through choice of assignments, lessons and assessments.” I took all of the feedback and comments I received and created a wordcloud.

 

Word Cloud

Feedback, Accessibility & Equity

Feedback

First off, thank you to my reviewers for spending time going through my first module and providing feedback. It helps to have more eyes reviewing my course and different perspectives regarding what they liked about it and what could be improved.

 

Things that worked well Things that could be improved
#1) All content and activities were organized into one google document (with hyperlinks) making it easy to navigate

#2) Created multiple Lumi videos (7) that were interactive, informative, and aligned with course outcomes

#3) Course appeared professional and each lesson/activity included hyperlinks to answer keys, formative quizzes and videos making it convenient for students to access everything they needed

#4) Videos were welcoming and appropriate for age of learners

#1) Student agenda could be improved by renaming the document to something simpler and color-coating specific daily tasks 

#2) Could begin introductions to new content with a story to show students how this will look in the real world

#3) Making the important hyperlinks more prominent for students to find

#4) Including more real-life questions rather than the typical word problems

 

I appreciate all the feedback from my reviewers and I am going to do my best to respond to all of it. 

 

Feedback #1) I renamed my “Student Agenda” to “Daily Tasks” and redesigned the document to make it more colorful and less wordy. One of my reviewers had a great idea to have students connect on Discord by answering a Question of the Day to initiate conversation. This is brilliant because I do this in my in-person classes and can easily send a message first thing every morning to my online students. 

 

Feedback #2) Due to time limitations, I will not be redoing my lesson videos on Lumi to include a story; however, I found a few great videos on YouTube that fit within my unit. I can show how the pythagorean theorem is used in football, and how trigonometry is applied in different situations, such as analyzing blood spatter in a crime scene and in architecture. I can easily add these YouTube videos at the beginning of my lessons for students to view without spending too much extra time editing my existing videos. 

 

Feedback #3) Since I received my feedback, I adapted my worksheets for this module to add a video icon that links learners to my instructional videos, and a text box (in red) that directs students to check their answers and complete the formative quiz at the end of their lessons. This will make my worksheets more visually appealing and help catch my student’s eyes. 

 

Feedback #4) I plan on updating my word problems in the near future. Right now, I feel there are more pertinent tasks that I need to spend my time working on. Having all my worksheets online makes it easy to modernize questions/assignment details at any time… so for now, I will continue working on Module 2 and keep this feedback in mind.

 

A question my reviewers had related to my course timeline and how students who require additional time completing assignments will be successful in my course. To answer this question, most of my students taking this course will be working closely with a student support teacher (SST) in our school. This provides additional class time (during the school day) to complete their coursework. However, if the student, SST, and I (the instructor)  meet up at the beginning of the semester and feel the student will need an extension, we can make that work. Depending on how many modules this specific student needs to complete to attain their recovery credit, we can extend their module timeline to suit their needs. I do believe that students need deadlines, so I would feel comfortable providing a couple extra weeks to complete the course, but if we drag the modules too long, they may lose interest or motivation to finish. 

 

Accessibility & Equity

After our class on Wednesday night, I spent time reflecting on my course and wondered if my future students will have difficulties accessing their materials online. Since our Zoom meeting, I have changed all my hyperlinks in my google documents to match the words describing the link. For example, instead of attaching the link to the words “click here” to get to the answer key, I combined the attachment with the words “check your answers for assignment 1.” This will make it more accessible for ALL diverse learners, and was a simple task for me! I have also researched different APPS for mathematics that assist students with visual impairments. Some of these apps include: 

  1. Seeing AI: This is an artificial intelligence app that uses the camera to identify people and objects and audibly describes these objects for people. 
  2. Talking Scientific Calculator: This app includes a colorful calculator with large buttons for learners who have some vision, and the option to speak for commands in large numbers and formulas (compared to pronouncing a single number at a time).

 

Since I do not have a lot of experience working with students with diverse learning needs, I plan on reaching out to professionals, including my Principal, for more guidance. 

 

As of right now, I feel my course is accessible to the students in my school presently. All students will have the option to receive a printed copy of each module prior to beginning the course. They will also have the opportunity to use the school chromebooks, desktops in the library (these are available throughout the day, including lunch hours) and computers in the Student Support Teacher’s classroom. My students also have access to calculators, protractors, compasses, rulers and other necessary materials from the school throughout the course.

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Week #9: Response to Peer Reviews

My Peer Reviewer role! I was tasked to review two modules written by my peers. This task was uncomplicated because Katia provided a detailed template guide. I spent a fair amount of time reading each of the two modules and referenced the guide to provide, accurate feedback before I engaged in the actual online modules. I think what I appreciated the most from this assignment was:

  1. The time that it takes to write an online blended course reflects in the quality of work that is presented. Less is more! I personally know that writing curriculum is time intensive but is rewarding when you see quality and student interaction.
  2. Curriculum writers create content that is student centered. Just as in a live classroom, online classes build in motivational sets, anticipation sets, guided instruction, student interaction, and assessment that guides further instruction.
  3. Teachers/instructors do not have to leave their personal teaching styles at the door! We can still incorporate personal style with voice, choice of tech tools and applications, type of interaction, student outcomes and choice of assessment.

Reviewer: Comments on Prototype Modules

I would like to encourage my peers to keep creating and producing quality work. The prototypes were written in diverse voices that responded to the issues/challenges that students/learners face in society. Outcomes that reflect student needs is the purpose of education. My peers used their personal leadership styles to create an online course that responds to meeting needs. The ADDIE model is adequate for curriculum development because it gives the framework to produce quality work. The ADDIE model was used with proficiency, making the lessons in their modules easy to reference.

Lesson content was varied between the modules I reviewed. I found I had to switch my learning mode from high school student to adult learner. From the lens of a learner, I appreciated the simplicity and flow of content, while adhering to the overall goals of the assignment. Content written to target a specific audience was achieved. The flow between tech tools/applications was balanced with individual reflection with time for written responses. Being encouraged to write to the audience of your choice was a plus. Both prototype themes were written to accommodate a targeted group of learners. The creators felt that student-teacher interaction while completing an online class is an important social tool to engage their students. Overall, I felt encouraged by the work presented in these two modules because it gave me time to reflect on my own learning and ways to improve my prototype.

Receiver:

I appreciated the constructive feedback that was given. My topic choice covers all domains of learning: mental, emotional, physical, spiritual. Trying to capture elements of all domains was my intention and I realize that I will need to clarify this moving forward. Moving away from a traditional way of teaching/knowing to an online classroom takes creative, in-depth planning. As the curriculum writer, I have a lot of knowledge to share of First Nations language and culture. As an online curriculum creator, I need to take advantage of the platforms that are used in today’s classrooms.

Another observation I would like to make is that thorough planning is still the norm being taught at the university level. It has been a long time since I sat in a university class (1991) and using the ADDIE model to guide my planning brought me back to my undergrad days.

The feedback I received highlights:

  1. Using H5P makes learning interactive. I have the mindset to encourage interaction (even if its in the form of a worksheet) but incorporating H5P is a good fit for online classwork.
  2. Create connection! Give my students something to build knowledge with, e.g., explain a concept before the lesson starts. Build on their prior knowledge through connections.
  3. Land based learning and connecting to culture is validated. Educators value the need for our students to learn in this way. Cree pedagogy is an acceptable standard in today’s classrooms as a way to meet the needs of “all” students. This is encouraging to hear!

Thank you for reading my blog! Looking forward to reading more prototypes and giving my support!

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Reflection on Feedback and Overall Accessibility

Arkin and I continue our course prototype work toward our Arts Education lesson for our Grade 7 class, which ultimately involves having our students create a radio play.

Our course prototype design combines in-class instruction with digital components constructed with Lumi to contribute to an engaging and interactive introductory digital lesson for our students.

We presented our course shell to our class colleagues through Microsoft Word. We included our ADDIE to provide our reviewers with a detailed class descriptionEAL considerations, and a complete unit outline. We followed the ADDIE with our introductory lesson to Radio Plays (PowerPoint) and detailed modules (Curricular Outcomes, Activity Links, and Schedule) created by both of us. Finally, we concluded our shell by sharing our grading scale for reference. Although our course shell was not presented in a traditional Learning Management System (LMS) yet, we felt the organization and format we provided our reviewers with were sufficient for this first module. As we are both employees of the Regina Catholic School Division, we are working toward a finalized LMS created on Microsoft Teams…stay tuned!

The feedback we received from our colleagues during our Week 7 class and through the feedback comments was overwhelmingly positive and appreciated. Some of the commonalities among the feedback were well-constructed, easy to follow and use, student-centered, and age appropriate.

Because we hosted our course shell through the Microsoft Word document, it was suggested that we should have provided a bit of rationale and our ‘why’ for choosing to do so. It was also noted that although we used Microsoft Word, the document was clearaccessible, and appeared professional and polished. Another suggestion provided was to further our course interactions within the prototype. We acknowledge that we must further detail the SeeSaw and Teams interactions and further distinguish and outline classroom versus online interactions.

Some of the feedback we received regarding our course content is that the modules provide opportunities for differentiation and options for students. However, one of our Lumi modules presented challenges when our reviewers attempted to engage with the interactions based on the timing. The open-ended interactions didn’t allow the reviewer to type into the answer box. Something we will look at getting fixed and improving!

Overall, we are pleased to hear that our module was clear, considerate of the students we teach (as outlined in our ADDIE), and engaging for our learners. We will certainly take the feedback of fine-tuning some of our elements to improve our module.

When thinking about accessibility, we were cognizant of creating a course that met the needs of our diverse learners and created space for them to succeed. We have a lot of EAL students and designed a course that would both provide language learning opportunities and allow them to use their experience (for example, students do not write their own fairy tales but can use well-known ones or stories from their childhoods). While most of our students have access to technology at home, not everyone does; we created a plan to ensure those students do not miss out on opportunities (we utilized a program that can splice together recordings so students can record their own contributions to the project at school OR on their own time, and gives grace to absences or lack of tech at home; students do not need to be together to record, they need to collaborate when they can!).

Last week’s class had us reflecting on how our course could be adapted so students who are not permitted to use technology at school and/or at home could still meaningfully engage in our module. We are confident that we’ve created a course where the tech enhances the learning experience without being the sole learning provider. For instance, students can still create Foley sounds, show that they can identify spaces for Foley and soundscapes, and learn about radio plays without the technology component, and most importantly, they can still collaborate with their teammates while at school.

Reflecting on Peer Reviews

The combination of reviewing peers’ courses and receiving feedback on my own course has been extremely helpful in pointing out the obvious next steps in my course creation. I’ve never created an online/blended course before, and although Katia’s guidelines for the profile and prototype were very clear, receiving honest feedback at this point in the semester is much appreciated. Before looking at some of the other courses or having mine reviewed, I wasn’t sure how to make my particular course better. Now, I have some ideas! A few initial thoughts on moving forward as a result of being a reviewer and reviewee:

  • My course has unanswered questions. How will students know how to navigate the platform Canvas, which is likely new to them? If students are completing the course fully online, how will they know how much to do each day or where we are in the lesson sequence? What rationale do I have for students completing the JAM (Journal About Math) at the end of the topic rather than at another point, such as the beginning? How exactly will the course look when it is implemented, both in person and online, as it is technically blended? For a course that might have students completing it completely online and away from the classroom, these questions all need answers.
  • My course could be more concise. The “Lesson Guide” page for my first module is rather lengthy and wordy. I need to think about how to simplify this, perhaps by replacing some words with visuals/other media instead.
  • My course could be more engaging. Even though I’ve attempted to create an inquiry-based course, I’m not sure it’s hitting the mark. It still follows a very direct instruction-practice-quiz format, which might be hard to avoid, but I need to think about adding gamification or shuffling things around to increase the engagement factor.

So, back to the drawing board I go. If you have any brilliant ideas, I’m all ears!

Free Board Chalk photo and picture
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This week in class, we explored equity and accessibility in online courses. I hadn’t thought too much about these issues before, but Katia’s lecture and the subsequent small-group discussions helped me think about the accessibility of my own course, both for my particular learner personas and other potential students. Is my course accessible and equitable? Are there ways I can improve accessibility and equity?

Reading through Section 9.2 of Teaching in a Digital Age by Tony Bates, along with class discussions, helped me create a list of changes I could make:

  • Ensuring links are on the title of the document/page something is linked to, not just the word “here”, as this is unhelpful and confusing for screen readers
  • Including required prior knowledge for this concept, plus clearly stated instructions for my learner personas working exclusively at home, working at a grade 4 level, and who are just now learning English and will need language support
  • Clarifying steps for students who experience accessibility issues around wifi/connectivity

Looking at the Technological Equity and Accessibility For Virtual and Hybrid Learning reading that Katia suggested, I was reminded to consider that the students who would be completing this course fully asynchronously may need supports beyond those already provided by the online function. As stated in my ADDIE model, two of my learners are attending this course from home due to mental health challenges. These students may have barriers and challenges beyond being in class that might prevent them from completing coursework on time or in full. As I certainly would not want to exacerbate the stress levels of these students, I want to include something in my course that clearly states that accommodations can be made on an individual basis and that I (the instructor) am happy to meet with students virtually, by phone, or communicate by chat and make a plan to help alleviate unnecessary stress and ultimately help them be successful.

Spending a little time on my Canvas-hosted course, I realized that there is an accessibility checker right in the LMS! Cool! So I was already able to make some changes suggested by Canvas.

I was recently listening to The Office Ladies podcast and the hosts (Jenna and Angela) were talking about how really good things aren’t created the first time. I’m paraphrasing, but they discussed how you have to make a lot of crap before you make something great. I immediately thought of this course I’m creating. As I tinker with it, change it around, add and remove things, and continue to ultimately just mold it into what I hope it to be, I’m confident that in the very least, it will be better than it is right now. And if and when I create an online or blended course in the future, it will be better than this one.

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Course Prototype – Reflection to Feedback: Accessibility

Meagan and I continue our course prototype work toward our Arts Education lesson for our Grade 7 class, which ultimately involves having our students create a radio play.

Our course prototype design combines in-class instruction with digital components constructed with Lumi to contribute to an engaging and interactive introductory digital lesson for our students.

We presented our course shell to our class colleagues through Microsoft Word. We included our ADDIE to provide our reviewers with a detailed class description, EAL considerations, and a complete unit outline. We followed the ADDIE with our introductory lesson to Radio Plays (PowerPoint) and detailed modules (Curricular Outcomes, Activity Links, and Schedule) created by both Meagan and me. Finally, we concluded our shell by sharing our grading scale for reference. Although our course shell was not presented in a traditional Learning Management System (LMS) yet, we felt the organization and format we provided our reviewers with were sufficient for this first module. As we are both employees of the Regina Catholic School Division, we are working toward a finalized LMS created on Microsoft Teams…stay tuned!

The feedback we received from our colleagues during our Week 7 class and through the feedback comments was overwhelmingly positive and appreciated. Some of the commonalities among the feedback were well-constructed, easy to follow and use, student-centered, and age appropriate.

Because we hosted our course shell through the Microsoft Word document, it was suggested that we should have provided a bit of rationale and our ‘why’ for choosing to do so. It was also noted that although we used Microsoft Word, the document was clear, accessible, and appeared professional and polished. Another suggestion provided was to further our course interactions within the prototype. We acknowledge that we must further detail the SeeSaw and Teams interactions and further distinguish and outline classroom versus online interactions.

Some of the feedback we received regarding our course content is that the modules provide opportunities for differentiation and options for students. However, one of our Lumi modules presented challenges when our reviewers attempted to engage with the interactions based on the timing. The open-ended interactions didn’t allow the reviewer to type into the answer box. Something we will look at getting fixed and improving!

Overall, we are pleased to hear that our module was clear, considerate of the students we teach (as outlined in our ADDIE), and engaging for our learners. We will certainly take the feedback of fine-tuning some of our elements to improve our module.

When thinking about accessibility, we were cognizant of creating a course that met the needs of our diverse learners and created space for them to succeed. We have a lot of EAL students and designed a course that would both provide language learning opportunities and allow them to use their experience (for example, students do not write their own fairy tales but can use well-known ones or stories from their childhoods). While most of our students have access to technology at home, not everyone does; we created a plan to ensure those students do not miss out on opportunities (we utilized a program that can splice together recordings so students can record their own contributions to the project at school OR on their own time, and gives grace to absences or lack of tech at home; students do not need to be together to record, they need to collaborate when they can!). 

Last week’s class had us reflecting on how our course could be adapted so students who are not permitted to use technology at school and/or at home could still meaningfully engage in our module. We are confident that we’ve created a course where the tech enhances the learning experience without being the sole learning provider. For instance, students can still create Foley sounds, show that they can identify spaces for Foley and soundscapes, and learn about radio plays without the technology component, and most importantly, they can still collaborate with their teammates while at school.

Feedback and Equity

“Feedback is the Breakfast of Champions”

– Ken Blanchard

This quote jumped out at me as I related to and agreed with the message, and thought it was appropriate for projects such as the one we are working on.  As I was inserting the quote into this blog post, I thought that I should find a definition of “Breakfast of Champions” to share to put it into context. This turned out to be a lot harder than I thought! People use this expression in many ways, not surprisingly mostly with sarcasm, and some were unexpected!

I finally found a definition that matched most closely to how I define this phrase, it came from definitions.net which cited ChatGPT:

breakfast of champions

Breakfast of champions is a phrase used to refer to a meal or food that is considered nourishing, substantial, or of high quality. It can also be used metaphorically to describe something that is regarded as the best or most important, particularly in the context of personal success, achievement, or excellence.

This is the context of the phrase in my mind when I related to Ken Blanchard’s quote above.

I also discovered there is a novel published in 1999 called “Breakfast of Champions”. Of course, I then went down the YouTube rabbit hole to find some Wheaties commercials as Wheaties is the origin of the phrase. I discovered Wheaties is 100 years old this year! If you want to learn more about Wheaties, this 5-minute video from Cereal Time TV has many surprisingly cool facts. Enjoy!

Anyhow, moving on….this past week, Katia provided us with two valuable learning opportunities:

  • working through two other course shells and modules
  • receiving peer feedback on our course shells and module

Being the Reviewer

Working through the other shells, was a great experience for me. It’s so interesting to see how differently and creatively people approach a similar task.

The two modules that I reviewed were developed for 2 very different target audiences. Both of which I learned some new ways of approaching a course. Some things we talked about in class but seeing them in action was insightful. Some ideas I learned are:

  • Use minimal architecture and a straightforward approach to organizing the modules.
  • Incorporating multiple options for teacher-student and student-student interactions
  • Provide pre-testing to identify if the student needs to complete all elements of the module
  • Use case-studies! They are an excellent way to teach adult learners.
  • Perhaps not everything needs to be graded. Maybe some elements simply need to show progression.

Receiving the Feedback

Feedback is the breakfast of champions. It provides substance and nourishment and, if heeded, it can foster growth and sustainability. Effective feedback must be direct, and specific, and include recommendations for improvement. I feel both of my reviewers provided effective feedback in this way that offered substance for positive changes. What did I take away?

  1. Each module is organized into 3 sections: Learning, Activities, and Assignments. Both reviewers found it easy to navigate.
  2. A welcome video would be beneficial.
  3. One of the links did not work for either reviewer. Went I went back I realized I had forgotten to put the link into the section.
  4. Further to 3. Proofreading is important.
  5. I wasn’t sure if the interactive activities were appropriate for the adult learner. However, both reviewers responded positively to them, so I can take away that they are age-appropriate.

One of the reviewers provided a list of ideas to incorporate, however, they acknowledged that it was out of the scope of the assignment, and are suggestions for implementation. I appreciated these ideas very much.

I am grateful to Katia for including peer review in her class. As I move forward and develop further modules, it is very useful to have these experiences to create more effective learning materials.

Equity and Accessibility in Online Learning

I found the equity class had some interesting discussions. The discussions were about equity in general, which highlighted that if one was creating an open public-facing course, it would be extremely challenging to meet all needs. Especially with limited resources. It was nice to hear that some resources exist in SK school divisions such as translating documents into braille. However, it was pointed out that there are barriers to using this service effectively.

For my class, the students are required to have at least one year of university prerequisites, as well as fill the job description of a Radiation Therapist. This includes lifting 25 pounds and being able to transfer patients safely, just to name a few. These job requirements remove some of the learning barriers related to equity and accessibility.

For other barriers, I have experienced in the past that students have already identified accommodations that they require in their previous year(s) of schooling. I have also experienced discovering these barriers alongside the student as the term progresses. Working together to figure out what the student needs is part of my job as an instructor and mentor. At the cancer centre where I work, we use what is called the Patient Dignity Question with patients which was put into place by the great Dr. Harvey Max Chochinov. It goes like this – “What do I need to know about you as a person to give you the best care possible?” It is a beautiful question that can be re-framed in different circumstances. For example, as a teacher, you can ask the student, or the parent “What do I need to know about you as a person to help you through this learning journey?” At the Radiation Therapy school, it is a learning journey, not just a one-off class. We are with the students throughout their training, guiding them to be effective, empathetic healthcare providers. Asking this question invites the student in a thoughtful way to be open about learning challenges. I have a small class and have the luxury of tailoring the class content/delivery method from year to year if necessary.

I am looking forward to reading other blog posts.

The Reviews are In…

Introduction

Firstly, before I discuss my feedback (on my first module) I would like to take a moment to thank the individuals who provided it.  As a teacher I often find myself working and developing resources in isolation (despite research indicating that teacher collaboration is fundamental to effective instruction).  It has been years since I have had a peer review my lessons and I respect and value the information that has been shared with me.  While I will not be implementing every suggestion (mostly due to time constraints), they will be used to guide this project long after this university course has concluded.

What Worked

Rationale & Utility

Both of my colleagues agreed that I provided a strong rationale for creating this content.  My students will purchase (or lease) a new or used vehicle sometime in their lives.  Arming them with the knowledge necessary to make an informed purchasing decision is both practical and directly tied to the workplace mathematics curriculum in Saskatchewan.  One reviewer noted that the inclusion of statistical data regarding our dependency on personal vehicles in Canada strongly supports the need for this type of instruction.  Essentially, this course is both useful and necessary.

Victory Loves Preparation

Both instructors who reviewed my work appreciated the structural elements of the course.  While my work was not flashy (more on that later) it was logically laid out and relatively easy to navigate.  My navigational elements worked as intended and both mentioned the inclusion of a “quick start guide” as a novel (and appreciated feature).  Admittedly, given the age group my module is targeted at (grade twelves) I have an easier task in terms of design (I can assume a degree of familiarity with the platform and a reasonable level of language proficiency) compared to those providing content to elementary students.  My reviewers liked the general level of polish of my materials which (for the most part) appeared professionally created and designed with the appropriate age group in mind.  It seems all those nights learning PowerPoint have finally paid off.

What Didn’t Work

Proofreading: It works Best when Used Beforehand

Nothing undermines your efforts to be taken seriously than conspicuous spelling and grammar errors.  My module has more than one.  It seems like a small thing, but the level of polish in one’s teaching materials needs to be high.  It is a little bit embarrassing to boast on one hand that you have taught for twenty years, and on the other not know how to spell the word “because.”  As an aside this shows how utterly dependent I have become on spelling and grammar checkers built into popular platforms.

Word Salad

As anyone who has taken the time to read through one of my blog posts knows I tend to be a bit verbose.   Long winded.  I talk too much.  This in turn is reflected in my written questions.  As one reviewer noted I overcomplicated many of my activities by using too much jargon.  Direct questions that emphasize brevity and key information will make my summary activities in my videos far more effective.  My first revision (after correcting my myriad of spelling errors) will be to condense and focus these questions for improved readability.  Going forward I will try to make sure that I spill less ink in the name of prose and get to the point quicker.

The Best Piece of Advice I was Given (That I Will Ignore…For Now)

The toughest pill to swallow (because it was true) is a fundamental weakness of my course.  While my lessons are informative and valuable, they are not that engaging.  Looking over my feedback it is evident that I am missing a hook, or something to draw my students in.  My immediate thought was that I should have opened with an anecdote or story – or better yet re-framed my course as a simulation.  How interesting would it have been if I had role-played a used car salesman or a bank loan officer and presented this course as a series of choices?

So why not do that?

Time.  It is in my nature to work ahead.  I have created so much material at this point that the thought of dumping all of it and restarting from square one makes me feel a little queasy.  This does not mean that I am going to disregard this feedback.  To the contrary, I intend to develop this into a full online course.  My next unit (which is on small business mathematics) will use this simulation idea from the outset.  Hopefully this will help increase student engagement.